Friday, September 13, 2013

Students' stories

*Note: I have changed the spelling, added capitalization, and punctuation to make it easier to read, but I have not changed grammar.**

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by Monica
Once upon a time there lived a giraffe and a monkey.  They loved to play a lot. It was raining a lot. Then they could not play outside and they were sad that they could not play outside.  And when it stop rain  you can go outside. Ok the moms said. Ok said the kids. Then it stop, then they went outside. It wet, they said. Then they went to tell them. Moms said I know. then the kids said Then I'm gonna go take a nap. Ok ok said the mom. They woke up. Then it was not wet anymore. Then they went outside to play house theater. They come in the house. The end.

The Haunted Mansion
by Ethan
Once upon a time there was a haunted mansion. The mansion had nuts, bowns (?), rats, broken stairs, and traps of doom. Once I walked in there and I saw cobwebs everywhere. I ran out of the mansion. You guys can find out for yourself but be careful and watch out for your doom.

The Haunted Stapler
by Lillian
This is the story of the haunted stapler. It was one summer day in August when we had a sub. We were just doing word wall words when the sub tried to staple a word, but the stapler didn't work.  She tried and tried but it still didn't work so we refilled the stapler. But it still didn't work.  So we just left it there and didn't staple the words.  That is the story of the haunted stapler.

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by Maria
Once there was a beautiful princess. She loved nature and all of the flowers.  But one day all of that went away.  She was sad and couldn't believe it.  She wanted it all back. There was not rain, no body in any land. It was sad.  Everyone tried to get it back.  But the only way they could get it back is if a drop of sun will come down. They waited for years and years to pass until she got married, that drop of sun came down.  It started to spread and all of it came back.  Everyone started to dance and it rained and rained and rained. The flowers were sprouting. They were happy. They had a big great feast. After they dance more and more. It was really fun. They stayed up all night. The End.

How Great my School Is 
by Sienna
Hi! My name is Sienna. I got to Barnett Elementary. Come on, I will show you around.  Firs twe wil lgo to be a little buddy for the kindergartners. Shhh, they are learning in class. Now let's sit down and maybe we can learn too.

Ok, we have been here for a long time. Let's go into the upper grades into second grade. Here we are. Let's go to Mrs. Anderson's class. Hmmm, are you thinking what I am thinking? Come on, let's leave and come on Saturday.  The teachers will be here..."Sunday Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday. Sunday Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday!" See you there. Come on!


1 comment:

  1. This totally made my day! :) Thanks for sharing these!

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